Renault Alpine

[bynak]

Hi,

this is my first 3d car modeling. Since I am new to 3d any comments and advices will be welcome. :)

Cheers
Vassil

[Marijn]

hi bynak, and welcome to the forum! How did you get here? The model looks very good, I can't say anything bad about it from a first glance. The presentation could be improved a little bit, because it still lacks a bit of realism. But this is truly a great job, especially if it's your first car.

[bynak]

Thank you very much for the comment!

As I said I am very new to 3d in general and I am studying Cinema 4D for 3 months and any advices for improvement would be great. :)

[brammezz]

WOW mijn droom auto :w00t:
looks nice

[elbe3d]

... very nice car, good work Vassil :thumbup1: ...

[bynak]

Thank you very much for the comments guys!:)

I would love if you give me some pointers and advices on improving the render and making it more realistic.

Cheers
Vassil

[Rich_Art]

IF you want to adjust the image than you must post it in the wip section and not in the final section. This for finished artwork. :)

Peace,
Rich_Art. :thumbup1:

[PeterL]

Hi Vassil, very well done - certainly if it' s one of your first models :w00t:

A wireframe would be nice :001_cool:

Peter

[bynak]

Here is the wireframe.:)

[Marijn]

Looks pretty good! I do notice a lot of tris (if you ignore the 1 subdivision HN, because HN turns tris into quads), which is generally a bad thing. But in this render it does not realy show, even though you have reflections. So it's not really a big deal.

[Morris]

Very nice model.
Same remark as Marijn...the mesh looks a bit strange here and there, with the risk of getting some strange reflection patterns at certain angles.
but otherwise it looks very, very nice.
Maybe the Chrome material could use a little more briliance

Good work :thumbup:

Greetz,
Morris

[Tom]

Thank you very much for the comments guys!:)

I would love if you give me some pointers and advices on improving the render and making it more realistic.

Cheers
Vassil

here is maybe something that would do quite a bit according to me,
antialiassing on best since the outlines don't appear to smooth (on my screen nayway)

and i'm not to convinvced about the material of the lamps

now i sound liek a critic but the only other thing i could say was the same as what has been posted so many times before me. And since ya asked for some tips to improve the render, i thought it might be more usefull to post these lil comments ;)